Week ending poetry.

by Maria on January 11, 2008

in Mothering,Poetical

photo unavailable Week ending poetry.

they run off ahead
independent from me now

both are growing up

1338959961 a93cf33414 o Week ending poetry.

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1 suchsimplepleasures January 11, 2008 at 7:28 pm

that was beautiful!!! did you put your name over in the link at playgroups are no place for kids? if not…go do it! if you have…good job!!
xo

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2 Rachel January 11, 2008 at 7:39 pm

Welcome to haiku Fridays! You did a great job and I love the accompanying picture. They do grow up too fast, don’t they.

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3 Kathryn January 11, 2008 at 7:42 pm

Awe. Sweet and sad. That pic says so much too.
Great ku!

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4 Cathy January 11, 2008 at 8:05 pm

They grow way too fast, don’t they??

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5 AnGlOpHiLe FoOtBaLl FaNaTiC January 11, 2008 at 8:31 pm

The picture is the perfect way to illustrate your ku. Welcome to the world of haiku!

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6 Momo Fali January 12, 2008 at 1:13 am

Truly…it happens way too fast.

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7 Scylla January 12, 2008 at 1:51 am

That was lovely, it made me tear!

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8 Immoral Matriarch January 12, 2008 at 1:55 am

@suchsimplepleasures ~ yes, I did. And the sister site too. :)

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9 Immoral Matriarch January 12, 2008 at 1:56 am

@kathryn ~ :)

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10 Immoral Matriarch January 12, 2008 at 1:57 am

@AFF – Thank you! I took it yesterday @ the park and it seemed to fit.

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11 Immoral Matriarch January 12, 2008 at 1:58 am

@scylla – Aw, see that’s it! Now I’m tearing up too!

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12 Secret Agent Mama January 12, 2008 at 4:06 am

That haiku sums it up perfectly! Great work here.

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13 Jenni January 12, 2008 at 4:50 am

I always complain that my kids don’t do enough on their own (6,4,2, 4 mos), but when they do it’s “they don’t need me anymore!”

So emotional, this mommy thing.

Nice haiku.

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14 Deb January 12, 2008 at 8:30 am

I hear there are pills that can stop that from happening.

Beautiful.

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15 Immoral Matriarch January 12, 2008 at 1:55 pm

@SAM – Thank you. :)

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16 Immoral Matriarch January 12, 2008 at 1:56 pm

@Jenni – It really is – that’s how I feel too. And part of the reason I still call my toddler a baby and won’t potty train her. *lol*

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17 Manners & Moxie January 12, 2008 at 4:31 pm

Awww… it makes me so sad. They grow up too fast! I want the pitter patter of little feet again. :)

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18 Avery Gray January 12, 2008 at 4:34 pm

Why can’t they stay this young forever? It’s just not right!

Great haiku!

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19 Huckdoll January 13, 2008 at 8:45 am

Beautiful.

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20 suchsimplepleasures January 17, 2008 at 3:52 am

hope all is well. haven’t seen you around in a few days!!!
take care

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21 cablegirl January 20, 2008 at 3:47 pm

What a lovely and moving haiku. Well done!

~ a Weekend Blog Hopper. ;)

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